Sunday, February 28, 2010

Unventured


Screaming like a dog
In the midst of fog,
Engulfed by pain
I try in vain.

Twilight Kisses my Ass
Just to Harass
In clutches of dark
I was left alone to bark.

Sitting in form of Indian litter
I hope the future to glitter
Breeze whistles in my ear
I wish not to hear.

Its because I took the Road not Taken
Which said Forsaken
My eyes are now moist
Fuck Robert Frost !!

20 comments:

  1. v gud gultesh.... pehli baar kuch samjh me aaya tumhara likha hua.... but fir v pura nahi :P

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  2. hard to ingest
    difficult to digest

    dont write again
    dont create pain

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  3. osome launde....... mast likha hain, but y so angry with robert frost

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  4. @ saurav mujhe kuch poora nahi karna tah
    @ sushank thanks for encouragemnt

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  5. enti roi adhi neeku encouragement laa anipistundaa

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  6. @ govind thanks ... i dont know... some to blame for me

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  7. thank you... i am blown off by the fact that you commented ..... thank you so much

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  8. well written thumu ... could have been a lot better though ... :)

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  9. @ kamal thanks ....@ saabu fuck fuck fuck!!!

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  10. fuck u konda... i dont like diplomacy asss

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  11. Why did you delete the comment on my blog? You are entitled to your opinions, you know :-).

    I am not as naive to say that everyone is just great but there are definitely good people around. Some people are bad - really bad but sometimes I think we choose to focus so much on the bad people that we never see the good ones in our lives.
    I am sure you at least have some good people in your life as well.

    Please feel free to voice your opinion on my blog. I respect yours :-)

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  12. Remember, people are almost always going to bring you down, the question is how much are you going to let them effect your personality? :-)

    The choice, at the end of the day, is yours.
    I choose to see the good despite seeing misery all around me. And that take courage, my friend.

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  13. nice attempt, a readable post atlast.......though it is hard on the meter and tough on the reader,

    and what's that road you've taken?

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  14. fuck u...dude how can it readable if its hard on meter and tough on reader :P .... a road that shows up evryday ....

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  15. Well, I'm taken by surprise to find this fucked up facet of an apparently-always-merry Karthik!

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